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Written by Authillin   
Tuesday, 17 June 2008

A spy meets a woman at a club and come back home for some fun with ropes.

 

Well this is my first crack at erotic story writing.  I write in play format so there is very little aside from dialogue, so I hope you don't mind having to use your imagination to fill in some of the blanks.  If you read this could you please leave a comment, I was very reluctant to share this and it would mean allot to me if I got any feedback (even if you didn't like it).  Hope you enjoy reading it as much as I did writing it.  Just a note about the naming, C stands for Congo Spy and I left her description purposely vague, you should fill in whoever is your ideal mistress (I imagine a tall Indian Woman with dark brown almond shaped eyes and legs that come up to her shoulders).

(Scene opens with a man getting tied to a chair.  He is shirtless in jeans.  Tying him up is an attractive woman, wearing panties and a bra.)

 

C: You don’t look very tanned from your trip.

 

R: What are you talking about?

 

C: Your trip to the Congo.

 

R: I don’t know what you are talking about.

 

C: Of course you do Ryan Sheldon.  You were just in the Congo meeting with a rebel group as a liaison from the CIA, advising them on weapons and tactics to overthrow the dictator.

 

R: I'm just a --

C: Cut the crap (throws him pictures of him in the Congo).  I work for the dictator your government is trying to overthrow, and you have very valuable information I need.  You are going to tell me exactly what you sold them, what you taught them, where they are, how strong their forces are, and everything you can remember.

R: Surely you know I'm not going to tell you anything.  There is no pain you can put me through that will make me talk.

C: Who said anything about pain?  I was just going to ask nice.

R: (looks at ropes) You've already played that card; I don't think I'll be falling for that again.

C: It's not a matter of falling; it's an inevitability (takes out lipstick).  You see there are other ways of getting a man to do what you want aside from force.  Take this lipstick for example (undoes cap), it has a chemical in it that will make a male subject very sugestionable for a short period of time.  It is applied through the skin and reacts with a hormone that is released during arousal to alter your mental state.  The more aroused you are the more effective it is.  A simple kiss was enough to get you to invite me to your room, a few more and all I had to do was ask for you to let me tie you up.  Don't you find it strange how you, a veteran CIA operative, would willingly put yourself in such a vulnerable situation?  Well I have a secret for you, (closely, whispering in his ear) you had now willpower when I asked you.

R: There is a little problem for you though, (tugs at ropes) I'm not into bondage, and I don't think kisses are going to do it anymore.

C: (belittling) You have thought of everything haven't you Mr. Smart CIA man.  If only there were a way to for me to put my lips some ware on your body and have you be aroused against your will . . . . (She looks down at his zipper).

R: We can cut a deal, I'll give you information, you give me information.  I can get you out of the country safely.  If you go through with this you won't live past the night.  If you kill me they will hunt you down, If you let me live I will hunt you down.

C: I'm going to let you live, and you are going to let me walk out of here.

R: I've read a briefing about this drug; the effects only last at most five minutes, which is not much of a head start on me.

C:  (during the speech she is undoing his zipper, taking out his penis and massaging it) The drug lasts five minutes, but that is just the beginning.  I'm going to brainwash you and turn you into my slave, then have you pleasure me, then get the information I need and turn you into my personal double agent.  At the end of this you will be madly in love with me and do anything I ask, drugged or not. (She kneels in front of him, and looks at his now hard cock) You see, men are so easy to manipulate. (She applies lipstick, slowly. Looking directly into his eyes) They are so weak. 

(She takes him in her mouth and starts out slowly.  He is struggling fiercely but cannot move enough to disrupt her actions.  His resistance soon becomes noticeably weaker, until it stops altogether. She takes him out of her mouth and stands.  His cock, now covered in red lipstick, is twitching with arousal)

C: See, it wasn't that hard to give in.  It sort of hits you in waves doesn't it?  It washes over you, at the same time relaxing and exciting, and your mind just goes blank.  It is a nice feeling isn't it?

R: (he nods)

 

C: (Commanding) Answer me when I ask you a question.

 

R: Yes, it feels nice.

 

C: Better, we will work on obedience latter.  Now I want you to do something for me, I want you to look into my eyes.  That's it just stare into my eyes.  Once you start you can not stop because my eyes are irresistibly hypnotic.  Even now, just sitting there staring into my eyes you are falling deeper and deeper into hypnosis.  So deep in fact that you are finding it hard to stay awake.  You have only two desires right now, to look into my beautiful, hypnotic eyes, and to fall into blissful hypnotic trance.  You can't do both of them at the same time, do you continue to stare or do you fall fully into a trance?  You can't decide can you?  Of course you can't.  Do you want to know why you can't decide, because I have not decided for you.  I make all your decisions from now on.  My first decision will be for you to SLEEP! (During her speech she had moved closer and closer to him, gently swaying, eyes inches from his, near the end her hand was placed on his shoulder and then her palm slid to the back of his neck.  Her command to sleep is reinforced by her pulling his head forward and down)

 

C: You are now deeply hypnotized, and will do exactly as I command you.  I want you to imagine that you are at the bottom of a staircase.  There are five steps in front of you, and as I count from one to five you will imagine that you are walking up these steps.  With each step you take you will become more and more awake and alert, until I count to five.  On the count of five you will be fully released from this hypnotic trance.  You will not remember anything that has happened just now, and in your mind you will only remember getting a blow job wile being tied up.  When I snap my fingers and command you to sleep though you will fall deep into a hypnotic trance.  Ten times deeper than you are now.  You will not be able to resist falling into this trance when I snap my fingers and tell you to sleep.

One,

Two,
Three,
Four,
Five!

 

R: (sleepily) That was amazing . . . .

 

C: (Probing) What?

 

R: You know, (looks down at his penis covered in lipstick) that.  It was the best I have ever had.

 

C: Ya, you liked it?

 

R: Ya, it felt amazing.  It was so calming and relaxing, but I mean that in a good way.

 

C: No, no, I know what you mean.  It just sort of makes you want to SLEEP! (Snaps fingers)

 

R: (falls instantly into deep hypnosis)

 

C: Good boy.  You did so well, you are a very subject.  You like being hypnotized don't you?

 

R: . . . . .

 

C: What is wrong, you like to be hypnotized don't you?  Look at me (forces him to look into her eyes).  You like being hypnotized, you enjoy being enslaved by me, you like the feeling.

 

R: I like to be hypnotized.

 

C: Of course you do.  In fact, (she starts to play with his penis) you find hypnosis to be a very big turn on.  You get aroused at the thought of hypnosis, at the idea of me taking complete control over you.  You have a fetish for hypnosis.  You have always had this fetish buried deep inside of you.  I just let it out and now you realize that you have always been waiting for a dominating woman to come along and make you her slave.  You are very happy to submit to my and my power and will never resist my attempts to hypnotize you or to take you deeper will you?

 

R: No, I will never resist you.

 

C: Why will you never resist me?

 

R: Because I love to be hypnotized by you.

 

C: You will address me as Goddess slave.

 

R: Sorry Goddess.

 

C: Why will you not resist me slave?

 

R: Because I love to by hypnotized by you Goddess.

 

C: Why?

 

R: Because I love to be hypnotized by you Goddess.

 

C: Again!

 

R: Because I love to be hypnotized by you Goddess.

 

C: Good, now never forget that.  You have an intense fetish for hypnosis, especially when I am the one who hypnotizes you.  In fact you love it so much that you are going to beg me to hypnotize you.  I am going to release you from hypnosis soon and when I do you will ask me to hypnotize you.  It does not matter what I say or how reluctant I am to hypnotize you, my refusal will just make you more and more desperate.  You will beg for me to make you my slave, is that understood?

 

R: Yes Goddess.

 

C: Good, now one the count of five you will awake and not remember what just happened.  In your mind you will think we were just talking about how amazing a blow job I just gave you.  Sub-consciously though you will remember that when I snap my fingers and tell you to sleep you will fall deep into a hypnotic trance, ten times deeper than you are now.  

One,

Two,

Three,

Four,

Five!

 

C: Are you ok, you zoned out there for a couple seconds?

 

R: Ya, it was just such and amazing blow job.

 

C: Well I'm glad I could make you happy.

 

R: Maybe it was the ropes or something, like the feeling that I have not control over what's going on.  I think that is a big turn on.

 

C: Really?  I hoped so, that's why I tied you up.

 

R: I'm really glad you did, but you know ropes are not the only way to make me feel like I'm not in control.  You could hypnotize me?

 

C: Ha, that stuff is just a bunch of crap.  Everybody knows that hypnosis is just a movie thing and it doesn't actually work.

 

R: Well if it doesn't work I'll just play along.  I'll be your slave without the ropes.

 

C: Your being pretty forward, (looks down at his growing cock). Wow this is quite the turn on for you isn't it?

 

R: Ya, it's just the idea of being completely controlled by somebody.  Like losing yourself completely.  It's such a turn on, I would love for you to hypnotize me.

 

C: I'm not sure if I could do that.  I don't know what I'm doing.

 

R: You can just pretend, it doesn't matter.  I'll obey you anyway.  Just hypnotize me and I will be your slave.

 

C: I do like the sounds of that.  Having a slave who is a CIA operative sounds like a good thing.

 

R: How do you know that?

 

C: I am an enemy spy, if I hypnotize you now you will be my slave forever.  Ask me to leave and I will leave you alone and never return, ask me to hypnotize you and I will take you deeper until you will be a shell of your former self, completely enslaved by me.

 

R: Please hypnotize me, it doesn't matter.  I want to be your slave, I want you to take control, I need to be your slave, I'll tell you anything, I'll do anything for you, I'll obey whatever you say, just hypnotize me.

 

C: I'm glad you are so willing, it make this so much more fun.  SLEEP! (Snaps fingers)

 

C: (untying his bonds) I don't think I need these anymore do I slave?

 

R: No Goddess.

 

C: You are not going to do anything that I do not tell you to do are you slave?

 

R: No Goddess.

 

C: You are going to be a good slave and obey all my commands aren’t you slave?

 

R: Yes Goddess.

 

C: Good slave.  Now, how do you feel about feet slave?

 

R: I do not like feet Goddess.

 

C: Excellent.  (Throws him to the ground from the chair and sits on the chair, crosses her legs and dangles a foot in front of his face.) Lick my foot slave. (He licks).  You now have a foot fetish.  Well, only for my feet. You will still not like feet, in fact you will find them repulsive, but you will be unable to resist my feet.  Right now you are licking away like a good slave and you do not enjoy it, but you do enjoy that I am making you do, so you will do it.  Your fetish will be so strong you will not be able to help yourself.  You will be completely and totally enslaved by anything to so with my feet; my socks, my shoes, my stockings, anything and everything to do with my feet.  What you are tasting now is what hypnosis tastes like.  Now smell my feet (places her foot against his face) this is what hypnosis smells like.  Any time you experience these sensations you will fall instantly into a state of deep hypnosis.  Stop (she kicks him away, and stands, taking of her panties.  She grabs him by his hair and sits back down, forcing his face into her pussy).  This is what you live for slave.  Your whole purpose in life is being fulfilled this moment.  You are here to please me, to provide me with pleasure.  Lick you fucking little slave.  You are so pathetic and weak, it was nothing to bring you to this point and now you are naked in front of me, eating me out in full awareness that I am your enemy, and you begged for this to happen.  So fucking weak and pathetic. Lick! (She presses his face harder and harder into her).  Such a good slave.  I know you are getting hard slave, I know this is a turn on for you, to be completing your life goal in pleasing me.  To be experiencing the fulfillment of your lives work in being totally lost in my power.  Stop (she pulls his face from her).  I am going to fuck you; you are going to lay there erect for me as I use you to please myself.  I am going to ride you until I am satisfied.  Then I will take your laptop with all the information I need, what is the pass code?

 

R: 6657830WZ

 

C: Good.  After I am satisfied I will leave you my sock.  You will pleasure yourself until you cum, but you will not be able to stop touching yourself.  You will keep on touching yourself until you cum five times, or you start to bleed, what ever comes first.  Once that happens you will fall into a deep and restful sleep, during which you will be completely unaware of anything until you awake.  When you do awake you will find your laptop back on your desk and will not remember anything this night.  In your mind you will remember having a lot of hot and passionate sex with me and will find yourself thinking about me all the time.  You will think you are falling in love with me and try and contact me.  I will contact you next week with further instructions.  Everything understood slave?

 

R: Yes Goddess.   


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Good job!
written by _Haepnoteased, June 26, 2008

I like this. The play format might be more difficult to extend to fit a full story w/o more descriptive passages, but works well for an episodic encounter such as this. The dialogue fit well with the repeated re-inductions, which were pretty smooth in of themselves. Hypnotic lipstick is always a welcome element, too! smilies/kiss.gif

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written by Authillin, June 26, 2008

Thanks. I guess my mind works in more episodic bursts than in sustained stories/plots. I know what you are saying about the lipstick though, I tried to through a little something for everybody in this. Glad you thought the inductions were pretty smooth, like I said this is my first run at something like this and I really appreciate the feedback.

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written by vyttor, June 26, 2008

Faaaaaaaaaaantastic. I'm not really into hypno-drugs myself, but apart from that, I loved your tale, and also your play-style - I'm an actor, after all... Specially loved this:

"You will still not like feet, in fact you will find them repulsive, but you will be unable to resist my feet. Right now you are licking away like a good slave and you do not enjoy it, but you do enjoy that I am making you do, so you will do it."

Beautiful

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written by Authillin, June 27, 2008

thanks alot Vyttor, that post made my day. I'm really glad you liked it and its good to know I have the support of an actor. Also you totally have the authors permission to stage performances of this play where and whenever you feel like it. A comment like that makes me want to try writting another one.

Like the concept
written by Pugugly001_, July 11, 2008

I like the story - I think the concept is fun in and of itself, but I think it would be improved by expanding it. As it is, I find I have a hard time buying into the *speed* of his submission, whereas if it were extended to a point where it took several encounters, it would be both sexier, and more believable.

But many thanks - I've enjoyed it - Pug

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